Cheers Gerry man, time is a fight, back ta the grind tomorrow, the write/read goes to the back burner. Got through your latest on this final day of Christmas break, a powerful piece you wrote. We play, we release and rebalance....... a rant my writes/rites must remain for now. An other ring calls tomorrow at 9, and sleep right now. We shine on, shine continually, truly madly deeply to sense - into this crazy boiling soup pot of life. Luck ta all the writers and music makers, those dreamers of dream
...great stuff Phoeagdor, so many ideas in here, and all replete with their inherent and individual flexibility...here's sincere advice...collate this material from ur articles, sharpen the ideas a little so they don't tend to slightly obfuscate or overshadow one another...while retaining their complexity...self-publish if necessary, this reads like a stream of consciousness...reminds me a bit of Kevin Barry's 'City of Bohane'? ?...i only read a few pages, i never read novels in full to date, i think four are the most i've completed...i suspect the reason, u may be frustrated at the moment is that u have surpassed ur intentions...ur mode of presentation would gain an audience, the material and style are begging to be released in such a format...there's a novellete? form isn't there?...
Cheers Gerry man, time is a fight, back ta the grind tomorrow, the write/read goes to the back burner. Got through your latest on this final day of Christmas break, a powerful piece you wrote. We play, we release and rebalance....... a rant my writes/rites must remain for now. An other ring calls tomorrow at 9, and sleep right now. We shine on, shine continually, truly madly deeply to sense - into this crazy boiling soup pot of life. Luck ta all the writers and music makers, those dreamers of dream
...great stuff Phoeagdor, so many ideas in here, and all replete with their inherent and individual flexibility...here's sincere advice...collate this material from ur articles, sharpen the ideas a little so they don't tend to slightly obfuscate or overshadow one another...while retaining their complexity...self-publish if necessary, this reads like a stream of consciousness...reminds me a bit of Kevin Barry's 'City of Bohane'? ?...i only read a few pages, i never read novels in full to date, i think four are the most i've completed...i suspect the reason, u may be frustrated at the moment is that u have surpassed ur intentions...ur mode of presentation would gain an audience, the material and style are begging to be released in such a format...there's a novellete? form isn't there?...